EVP evidence

Question:
Sentence structure mistakes (3 mistakes)
Passive voice use (7 mistakes but i’m not sure where)
Wordiness (7 mistakes, but I’m not sure were)
verb agreement (1 mistake)
other mistakes (1 mistake)
closing Punctuation (4 mistakes)
Punctuation within a sentence (3 alerts)
and any word busters?
nothing else is wrong but the stuff above- but I have to get all this corrected–I’ve been up over 48 hours and I’ve done everything I know how to do…please help me
Thanks Aubree Daniel

Ghosts are real
“It is possible that there exists emotions that are still unknown to us. Do you remember how electrical currents and unseen waves were laughed at? The knowledge about man is still in its infancy.” (Albert Einstein) Ghosts are real this is evidenced by, chemical and electrical energy, explained evidence, such as pictures, videos, and personal experience. Ghosts have been scientifically proven by the fact that humans have both chemical and electrical energy in their body. These energies always exist due to the rule that it can’t ever be destroyed even after death. Ghosts still posses that chemical and electrical energy and this makes it more sufficient to find them because there is highly professional equipment that detect that particular energy. The most commonly used equipment is, EMF detector, (Electro Magnetic Field), EVP recorder, (Electronic Voice Phenomena), a digital video camera, and a digital temperature checker. Ghosts have been caught unintentionally on cameras by non believers and believers. The belief and disbelief of ghosts have given many people jobs, because people want to find the “unexplainable”, and be the one with the explanation, when the only logical explanation is ghosts are real. Everybody in the world has a religion or culture, and every one of them believe in some sort of ghost. The majority of the populations of the U.S believe in ghost, because of the videos, pictures, and encounters of ghosts. Ghosts have been seen in asylums, homes, hospitals, grave yards, at a construction site, abandoned buildings and about everywhere you can possibly think of they have been spotted.
Some people don’t really know what ghosts are. Due the outlook TV, movies, and more have presented them to be this spooky creature that wants to harm you, and that’s not really what they are. Ghosts are disembodied souls from deceased humans. They roam this earth because they either don’t know they have passed away, they have a case to solve. As an example, investigators told their family that their loved one committed suicide and truth was he or she was murdered. The other common reason for them here is they are looking for something or someone. Ghosts have no sense of time passing.
As Albert Einstein once quoted, “”It is possible that there exists emotions that are still unknown to us. Do you remember how electrical currents and unseen waves were laughed at? The knowledge about man is still in its infancy.” The evidence is in every one of us, we have and will always have chemical and electrical energy, our equipment will soon be even greater than the ones we have now. We will also have our experiences, pictures, videos and have truthful concrete evidence that ghost are real.

and please do not copy this, my teacher will find it and give a zero for plagragism–and this is for a final grade…