The Ghost Hunting Parablog

Question: Sentence structure mistakes (3 mistakes) Passive voice use (7 mistakes but i’m not sure where) Wordiness (7 mistakes, but I’m not sure were) verb agreement (1 mistake) other mistakes (1 mistake) closing Punctuation (4 mistakes) Punctuation within a sentence (3 alerts) and any word busters? nothing else is wrong but the stuff above- but [...]

Question: ok this is really weird.. ive been “seeing” ghost since i was little.. usually its a shadow or an unrecognizable face.. the other day i was at my father in-laws place with my hubby and his brother and a few friends it was probably around 11ish at night.we were all sitting outside just goofing [...]

Question: hey guys. last night, or this morning, i woke up, say 6 oclock.. so the light was just rising, so i could seee i my room. i saw a person standing next to my tv, on the side though so i couldnt see thier face. i saw it clear as day. i even know [...]

Question: Last night I had a cold, so around 11 pm I took some cold medicine. The dosage was 2, but I was feeling impatient and took 4 pills. I fell asleep shortly after. At around 3 am, I was awaken by some strange noises coming from my closet, which was directly across the room. [...]

Question: Okay here goes, so i was ghost hunting in my backyard last night, it was dark and misty, i thought i saw one saw i fired a few rounds in the direction i thought the ghost was in. I thought i’d finally killed one, i laid down the shotgun and approached the ghost with [...]