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Plot: man wakes up after long unnaturally long coma without his memory, after being in the care of a boy for most of the boy’s life. he accompanies boy to the home of boy’s benefactor. **now and through out story the man discovers he can manipulate environment with strange power, possibly having to do with his lack of memory and long coma** Benefactor tells boy to do a mission. Boy and man do mission and find out mission hurts people, both return to home of benefactor with anger. Benefactor missing; blood on the floor supplying information which was the only reason the boy was doing missions in the first place (to get the info from benefactor) **now and throughout story man is haunted by disturbing visions and voices of a sinister entity**. The info was the location of a long lost friend of boy, they go and find old friend in abandoned cave who was living there for a long time. Boy asks old friend were the people are who brought him there by force, old friend directs them in general direction. old friend, man and boy travel to location and on the way find people in village without tongues and with bleeding wounds and burnt homes. village people beg for retribution and tell man, boy and old friend were the people who did it are (those same people who hurt the villagers also kidnapped old friend a long time ago from boy, that’s when man was in coma so boy took up responsibility for man when old friend was taken) they go to the place were the people are by taking a boat, captained by the former leader of village who is sad that he let the village be hurt. former village leader and boy attack the people (who attacked village, stole old friend and apparently killed boy’s mother while stealing old man away) man doesn’t fight all that much because of his beliefs however recently acquired they may be but still kicks some *** and old friend wishes he could fight but his eyes were cut out a long time ago by the people when he was kidnapped. they find leader of the evil people and to everyone’s surprise but the boy’s… the leader is the boy’s dad. the dad used to be a a student of old friend’s after old friend noticed that teaching the character I call ‘man’ put him into a coma. during the whole time, the entity that is torchering man’s mind is a demon dispatched from hell to kill or compromise man before he becomes too powerful due to his strange power. when they find the boy’s father he is trying to summon that same demon and also has the benefactor captured. the dad warns boy that if he gets to close he’ll kill benefactor but boy approaches anyway and dad kills benefactor by impaling his back up through his chest. the boy then looses control and starts beating dad to death with his own weapon (a cool looking type of blunt flail) until he dies. the demon, bound to the dad, fails to be summoned and plagues ‘man’ no more. they all go back to village to help out the people now in safety and later set out to aquire supplies to assist the hurting village people. man swears never to kill another person again, but we’ll see about that… well that’s it for the part one of the story, let me know what you think and please don’t judge to harshly but instead let me know on how I can improve it. as always peace out and also you can let me know if I should post part 2 here on answers by just telling me to add it. there are many details and things that would be clarified in the book and would add more depth to the story and make it better but which I have left out of the plot version for simplicity.

I’m sorry you didn’t like it kira, the point of it is pretty much impossible to see in this plot version because I left out some key elements of the relationships, through out the book the ‘man’ as I call him constantly has to fight the urge to adopt the boy and patronize him and also the mystery of the story is what keeps the reader exited. I would say the climax is finding out that the demon that’s been pestering the main character is actually coming to the earth. In the story, the idea of that demon actually coming to earth would be quite frightening as it would play a key ri=ole of both terror and seduction. the ending is the fact that the main character is safe and that the bo finally has his revenge. The story continues in a part two but I’ve tried to make the ending for the first half as satisfying as possible.